Haiku challenge. Your day in three lines 7-5-7

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  • melclaritymelclarity Member Posts: 3,291
    Icy windows steal my stare
    Frozen memories 
    Healing pain fragile like glass

  • kmakmkmakm MelbourneMember Posts: 6,842
    I can't sleep tonight
    Windy trees and restless knees
    Hot flush, doona off
  • kmakmkmakm MelbourneMember Posts: 6,842
    Hot flush, doona off
    My body is a furnace
    Cold now, doona on
  • kmakmkmakm MelbourneMember Posts: 6,842
    Cold now, doona on
    No nipples to tell the tale
    So strange that they're gone 
  • kmakmkmakm MelbourneMember Posts: 6,842
    Parts gone and parts moved
    My body is a stranger
    I don't recognise
  • ZoffielZoffiel Regional VictoriaMember Posts: 2,651
    Restless mind the fire burns out
    I rekindle it
    Stare at new flames with some hope
  • tigerbethtigerbeth MelbourneMember Posts: 507
    Sleep no more
    my body yells
     night time is a living hell
  • kmakmkmakm MelbourneMember Posts: 6,842
    A haiku for you @Annie C.

    Old man boab tree
    He can take the nuts you hurl
    Your tears wash the scars
  • Annie CAnnie C Member Posts: 516
    @kmakm
    Thinking cap is on. Damn where did that brain cell go?
    That's a beauty.
    I am taking pity on him lately.  So here goes - 

    Old man boab tree
    Some times I feel older than you
    You are there for me.

    Not as good as yours but it will do.

  • kmakmkmakm MelbourneMember Posts: 6,842
    @Annie C Love it. Excellent. Profound even.
  • Annie CAnnie C Member Posts: 516
    @kmakm
    I feel a new profession coming on!
  • kmakmkmakm MelbourneMember Posts: 6,842
    @Annie C Why the hell not?!
  • kmakmkmakm MelbourneMember Posts: 6,842
    edited November 2018
    At night the cracks widen
    The pain seeps out
    During the day, wallpaper.
  • Blossom1961Blossom1961 VicMember Posts: 925
    @kmakm Nailed it!
  • Blossom1961Blossom1961 VicMember Posts: 925
    Crazy in the head
    Joined by so many others
    Thank you for sharing

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