Haiku challenge. Your day in three lines 7-5-7
Eclipse as light becomes dark
Metaphor for change
The crickets stop then sing again.
Metaphor for change
The crickets stop then sing again.
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- Sad clouds eclipse the eclipse
Balancing gently onwards
Breezes cool refreshing all.
Not sure if I did it correct Zoffiel - Close enough, @soldiercrab Thank you
This format is seven syllables, then five then seven. Sort of, give or take some oriental calculations that don't translate to English.
We can say so much in so few words. If we try. Marg - Beginning still and silent
Melancholy pain
Excitement of homecoming.
Uggh - been awhile since I've tried something like that. - Wow that’s quite spiritual @zoffiel!
Take each day as it happens
Keep eyes on the prize
See the bright light at the end
there you go lol!!!
margie x - Seasons following seasons; None step out of line; Stepping lightly hour by hour
Circumvent the obstacle
Skirt the nincompoop
Breathe scream breathe in once again
Sorry, having one of those days!!
- @Afraser
what a great haiku... its ok to have one of those days
hugs - Travel the Highway
Wait in line
Released from Neuro YEAH !!! moving through the aches and pains
goosebumps rise soft breeze
days plans run like the river
- The slow creep of dust persists
Folding all in fug
Housework slouches on, anon.
